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IELTS Task 2 sample essay: Overtourism

Problem / solutionCulture and tourism

The question

Some popular tourist destinations receive more visitors than they can handle. What problems does this cause, and what measures could be taken to manage it?

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The plan

Position: Problems: damage to sites, rising rents and crowded daily life for residents. Measures: limits, pricing and spreading visitors.

  • Problems: fragile sites are worn down; short-term rentals push out residents; streets and transport become unusable.
  • Measures: caps and booking systems, tourist taxes and rental limits, and promoting other places and seasons.

Model answer

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Our checker: 8.0Task 8Coherence 8Vocabulary 8Grammar 8

Some of the world's most famous destinations now receive far more visitors than they can comfortably handle. This overcrowding damages the places tourists come to see and makes daily life difficult for local people, but it can be managed through limits, pricing and spreading visitors more evenly.

The most visible problem is physical damage. Ancient buildings, coral reefs and mountain paths were never designed for millions of feet and hands each year, and constant crowds wear them down faster than they can be repaired. A second problem affects residents. In popular cities, landlords can earn more by renting flats to tourists than to local families, so rents rise and neighbourhoods empty of permanent residents. Those who remain may find their streets blocked by tour groups, their buses full and their local shops replaced by souvenir stores. Over time, resentment grows, and a place that once welcomed visitors begins to resist them.

Several measures could restore the balance. Fragile sites can introduce daily caps and timed tickets, as many museums and national parks already do, so that numbers stay within safe limits. Tourist taxes and higher fees for cruise ships would reduce numbers at the busiest times while raising money for conservation and local services. Cities can also limit short-term holiday rentals, returning homes to residents. Finally, tourist boards could promote lesser-known towns and quieter seasons, spreading visitors and their spending across a wider area.

These steps need not reduce the benefits of tourism; they aim to make it sustainable.

In conclusion, overtourism damages heritage and pushes out the communities that give places their character. Limiting numbers, pricing peak demand and encouraging travel to other places and seasons can protect both sites and residents while keeping tourism's economic benefits.

Scored by the MyBandPrep checker on 7 October 2026. An estimate, not an examiner’s mark. How scoring works

Why it works

Task Response
Answers “problems” and “measures” fully, with measures that respond directly to the damage and the pressure on residents.
Coherence and Cohesion
A clear progression, with “restore the balance” signalling the turn from problems to measures.
Lexical Resource
Vivid but precise vocabulary: “empty of permanent residents”, “resentment grows”, “pricing peak demand”.
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
Accurate complex sentences with a good range of passive, comparative and relative structures.

Phrases worth reusing

  • never designed for millions of feet and hands
  • empty of permanent residents
  • resentment grows
  • restore the balance
  • the communities that give places their character

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